Mickey Mouse gets a few presents from seven of his friends for christmas and the price of those presents were all the same. Donald the duck steals a few presents which worth $8. This continues for three christmases. He got bored with these annual presents that has the same cost so he decided to sell all of the presents he saved to the auction. He split the presents into four equal groups. Mickey then sold each one of the groups of presents at auction. He added up his money earned in auction and it was $25.50.
1)Does the story fit with the equation? Is it functional? Would you actually write this equation from this word story problem? The story you made up fits the equation and I think this was very creative! I think you can use this story for your comic life project!
2) Does it make sense, or is it a little confusing? Discuss what is not clear, and suggest improvements. Your story made sense and I din’t find much confusing parts.
3) Are there any grammatical mistakes? How should they be corrected? Yay! I didn’t find any grammatical mistakes~
4) Is the story creative? How could it be made better? I think the story is very creative!)
5)What are the positive points about the word problem? I liked how you used Mickey Mouse and Donald Duck as an example^^
This word problem is functional, and it goes with the equation. The story was a little bit confusing but it did make sense. Some of the words are not clear. There are no grammatical mistakes. This story is creative, I like that you used Disney characters. You need to add a question at the end. Some positive point about your word problem is that it was creative, and you used Disney characters that fit with the story.
I like the way you created the story using the Micky Mouse. However, I think you should make your story line clearer by putting more details that explains what happened, why and how. Other than that, I think your math problem has a decent story line. I am very impressed with your vivid creativity and how Micky Mouse sold his presents in the auction. I believe that you’re going the right way of using your math equation in your story line. However, you should make your story more detailed.
I like the way you created the story using the Micky Mouse. However, I think you should make your story line clearer by putting more details that explains what happened, why and how. Other than that, I think your math problem has a decent story line. I am very impressed with your vivid creativity and how Micky Mouse sold his presents in the auction. I believe that you’re going the right way of using your math equation in your story line. However, you should make your story more detailed.
Mickey Mouse got a few presents from his friends for Christmas and the price of those presents are all $7. Donald the duck steals a few presents which worth $8. This continues for three christmases. He got bored with these annual presents that has the same cost so he decided to sell all of the presents he saved to the auction. He split the presents into four equal groups. Mickey then sold each one of the groups of presents at auction. He added up his money earned in auction and it was $25.50. How many presents did Mickey Mouse get from his friends?
Mickey Mouse got a few presents from his friends for Christmas and the all the presents worth $7. Donald the duck steals a few presents which worth $8. This continues for three christmases. He got bored with these annual presents that has the same cost so he decided to sell all of the presents he saved to the auction. He split the presents into four equal groups. Mickey then sold each one of the groups of presents at auction. He added up his money earned in auction and it was $25.50. How many presents did Mickey Mouse get from his friends?
Mickey Mouse gets a few presents from seven of his friends for christmas and the price of those presents were all the same. Donald the duck steals a few presents which worth $8. This continues for three christmases. He got bored with these annual presents that has the same cost so he decided to sell all of the presents he saved to the auction. He split the presents into four equal groups. Mickey then sold each one of the groups of presents at auction. He added up his money earned in auction and it was $25.50.
ReplyDelete1)Does the story fit with the equation? Is it functional? Would you actually write this equation from this word story problem?
ReplyDeleteThe story you made up fits the equation and I think this was very creative! I think you can use this story for your comic life project!
2) Does it make sense, or is it a little confusing? Discuss what is not clear, and suggest improvements.
Your story made sense and I din’t find much confusing parts.
3) Are there any grammatical mistakes? How should they be corrected?
Yay! I didn’t find any grammatical mistakes~
4) Is the story creative? How could it be made better?
I think the story is very creative!)
5)What are the positive points about the word problem?
I liked how you used Mickey Mouse and Donald Duck as an example^^
This word problem is functional, and it goes with the equation. The story was a little bit confusing but it did make sense. Some of the words are not clear. There are no grammatical mistakes. This story is creative, I like that you used Disney characters. You need to add a question at the end. Some positive point about your word problem is that it was creative, and you used Disney characters that fit with the story.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you created the story using the Micky Mouse. However, I think you should make your story line clearer by putting more details that explains what happened, why and how. Other than that, I think your math problem has a decent story line. I am very impressed with your vivid creativity and how Micky Mouse sold his presents in the auction. I believe that you’re going the right way of using your math equation in your story line. However, you should make your story more detailed.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you created the story using the Micky Mouse. However, I think you should make your story line clearer by putting more details that explains what happened, why and how. Other than that, I think your math problem has a decent story line. I am very impressed with your vivid creativity and how Micky Mouse sold his presents in the auction. I believe that you’re going the right way of using your math equation in your story line. However, you should make your story more detailed.
ReplyDeleteMickey Mouse got a few presents from his friends for Christmas and the price of those presents are all $7. Donald the duck steals a few presents which worth $8. This continues for three christmases. He got bored with these annual presents that has the same cost so he decided to sell all of the presents he saved to the auction. He split the presents into four equal groups. Mickey then sold each one of the groups of presents at auction. He added up his money earned in auction and it was $25.50. How many presents did Mickey Mouse get from his friends?
ReplyDeleteMickey Mouse got a few presents from his friends for Christmas and the all the presents worth $7. Donald the duck steals a few presents which worth $8. This continues for three christmases. He got bored with these annual presents that has the same cost so he decided to sell all of the presents he saved to the auction. He split the presents into four equal groups. Mickey then sold each one of the groups of presents at auction. He added up his money earned in auction and it was $25.50. How many presents did Mickey Mouse get from his friends?
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